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Comments from johnstr
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-30 12:54:15 | Cousin Britney | You need to use quotation marks when someone is speaking and separate each different speaker with a space between. It makes it easier to understand who is talking for your readers. |
| 2012-08-23 19:43:02 | Camp chapter one updated | I don't hide who I am or what I can or can not do. You can read my work at any time. That is if you are clever enough to do a search. Good luck but I stand by my previous comment. |
| 2012-08-29 17:16:24 | My love for nicole | 2012-07-08 22:48:07 WTF??? |
| 2012-08-30 23:14:49 | Project Assassin the Perfect Killer | Good stuff Sgt J. It's good to see you are back. Can't wait to see where else you will take us. Keep them comming. |
| 2013-04-07 12:27:38 | Good job. Keep the story going. I know how a story writes itself, I know that mine did. Waiting for more. Good luck. |