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Comments from Versed
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-01-13 23:50:17 | Eleven | I see what you mean. However, the story here took place at the very start of season 5, before Amy got married, thus not yet knowing that she was technically the Doctor's mother-in-law. I imagine it would be awkward later. :S I'm considering an Amy/Rory and possibly a Doctor/River but .. people don't seem to like this story so much so I'm having second thoughts. >_> |
| 2012-01-16 19:15:16 | Eleven | ಠ_ಠ Ahah I'll get to that.. I have maybe half of the second part written.. But if my life is at stake I'll finish it up this .. month. Week. :S |
| 2012-02-14 21:07:23 | The Darkmoon Faire (part 2) | Anonymous comments are allowed! And appreciated! Tell me if you liked the story, what you think was best (or worst..) Thanks! |
| 2012-02-16 00:56:53 | When your friend breaks up with his sexy girlfriend, the best thing you can do is to comfort her, invite her to your house and make her feel really good, especially if she is a virgin. | Well... as a start quotation marks are great :) Or you could be like James Joyce and say "screw that!" and possibly talk randomly in Latin. Um... back to the point, shorten the title and make some small changes to your writing and the story will have improved vastly. Good luck and please keep writing. Practice makes perfect! :D |
| 2012-02-19 02:38:08 | Religious nonsense. It's a fictional story... =_=; |