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Comments from Versed
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-03-02 21:15:31 | The Centaur Expedition | A good story in all, although there was just a little bit too much detail. "Thru" should be spelled "through", but other than that, I could definitely tell you worked hard on this story. I enjoyed it a lot. :) |
| 2012-03-03 02:36:40 | Druid's Ordeal (Full) | Has a lot of WoW themes! Except, you know, humans can't be Druids, but I digress ^-^; Anyway, a fantastic story -- I love it when the heroine kills the captor and gets free. Please, continue to write and improve, I was very impressed. Very interesting dialogue, as well... one, only one critique. Perhaps consider, in the future, using a word other than "girl". This was prevalent when addressing Dahlia, but a lot of other, different names could be used. Again, excellent job! :) |
| 2012-03-27 20:52:50 | The Darkmoon Faire (part 3) | Okay. I'll get to writing ASAP then. :) Also to the comment below me -- um. I think you're supposed to be 18+. O3O thanks for reading, guys! The more encouragement for the next chapter that I get, the quicker I'll get it out. |
| 2012-04-17 23:49:16 | The Darkmoon Faire (part 3) | It's on it's way, gosh D: Haven't had the time recently. |
| 2012-06-24 01:56:26 | The Darkmoon Faire (part 4) | Please leave comments! This is the, uh, finale, so I'd like to hear what readers thought of the entire work in general. (Yay or nay? If nay, leave comments as to how I can do better. I don't think I can apologize enough for the facepalm-worthy sexy scenes.) Thank you guys so much for bearing with me on this, I really appreciate the people who pushed me into finishing it. -_-; |