| 2012-06-16 11:50:05 |
A Game of Inches - Part Nine
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You are an amazing writer, every chapter I've read has just been amazing leaving me wanting more. |
| 2012-06-16 16:15:42 |
Daddy's Little Girl_(1)
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I think for a first time writer, you did a very good job. It's a get hot story, would love to hear more. You could lengthen the story a bit, spread it out with a bit more detail but even if the rest is written in the same manner it will stiil be a good read. Don't let the negative comments stop you from doing your way, if they think they can do better let them try |
| 2012-06-19 21:48:29 |
Amanda's Fantasy_(0)
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That was a very hot story, great job. Can't wait to read more |
| 2012-06-19 22:10:57 |
Helping Her Stretch out
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That was a really hot story, would love to read more |
| 2012-06-21 16:40:57 |
Daddy's Belonging
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I like it so far, hope you continue |