| 2012-04-20 09:06:00 |
Nikki's Daddy
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You did a pretty good job. I myself would have liked it better if Nikki seduced her dad instead of him raping her but still thought it was hot |
| 2012-04-28 20:37:28 |
Mandy's Brother
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I think you did pretty good for your first story. Don't let the negative comments keep you from writing more, I think you have a lot of potential |
| 2012-05-02 12:56:04 |
A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 - "It's your body Sally"
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I hope you write for a living, this story so far is one of the best I've read on here. I can't wait to read more |
| 2012-05-13 18:19:37 |
It Begins With the First
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I'll have to agree, you are just a little twisted but I LOVE IT , keep up the good work |
| 2012-05-14 20:42:30 |
Grandpa's Journals: The End and The Beginning
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As before, you did an amazing job with this series. I hate to see it end but you couldn't have ended it any better. Thank you |