| 2013-01-03 23:31:39 |
How to Care For a Golden Retriever
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What part of the story comes off as poor writing? I'd love to try and work on my weakness. I am a big fan of story lines, I'm sorry you feel that it was too long, but I don't like writing pure sex scene after sex scene. If anything, my stories are meant to arouse not necessarily be a fap story. About the manga thing, I have never read it nor do I know anything about it, I just always heard everyone referring to it as anime in school. Sorry that my story disappointed you but thanks for reading and the constructive comment! |
| 2013-03-01 19:54:59 |
Nick and Allie 7 - Start
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Part 8 will come I promise, but don't waste your time checking my profile too often cause I can't write 24/7 lol. Hopefully part 8 will get better reviews than this one though. |
| 2013-03-01 19:51:18 |
How to Care For a Golden Retriever
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First of all to the comment below mine, fu.ck off and go read something that has a million sex scenes that dont make any sense and have nothing leading up to them. Don't read anything else I write because you clearly can't handle the awesome. Anyways, just wanted to say I am working on part 2 of this story, stay tuned! |
| 2013-03-05 23:33:43 |
Arranged Rape Incorporated
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Good thing no one told the cops. |
| 2013-04-14 11:21:40 |
Mommy: The Sex Ed Teacher
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If you guys want a part 2 sure. |