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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-08 03:04:55 | Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 3 | @Anon 1 I never realised I had made those errors thanks for pointing them out, if I can find a way to fix them on here, I'll do it as soon as possible @Anon 2 Sorry mate the next chapter is already written and I afraid if your expecting what you mentioned your going to be disappointed. |
| 2012-07-09 09:40:34 | Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 4 | @Anon 1 If you haven't already get Dawnguard @Anon 2 I plan too. |
| 2012-07-11 10:02:42 | Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 6 | Sorry you feel that way. |
| 2012-07-11 10:13:51 | Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 5 | Wow that was a shock the system, I kind of feel a little depressed about my writing, thank you for your honesty in any case. As for my style of writing, yes maybe I should use more grammer corrections but that's how I write, I'm not a professional, and writing isn't part of my job description. As for proof reading, I do do it but I'm not perfect. I hope you don't take this as me whining, because I'm not, I am man enough to realise when I've made mistake, and out of curiosity is the word realise the error because if it is, then I might understand the problem, I'm not American, I'm Australian so some of my spelling might be different to you. But please do respond to this message and let me know. Once again thanks for the heads up on my mistakes, I have two more chapters to post and this site is up to date. |
| 2012-07-11 13:52:51 | Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 7 | @anon 1 Thanks. @anon 2 I said it's written I didn't say I posted it. |