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Comments from Bend Over Backwards
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-08-05 05:40:42 | Oh, Brother! | Man, I am as straight as they come, yet my cock STILL got stiff reading this! I am a fan of your writing, Lollylover, so I'm going to put it down to the way you write that turned me on and not the subject matter! |
| 2012-08-05 05:44:27 | A Walk In The Woods | The thick twat that made the last post needs everything spelled out to him or her: it's fucking obvious to me that the ending is hinting that the guy telling the story has grown SEXUALLY close to his sister. Get it, now, thicko? A strange story, but still erotic. i just pretended the little girl was a few years older (I made her 11 in my mind rather than seven) while I wanked over it! |
| 2012-08-05 05:46:59 | A Model Sister | I would like to see a sequel to this story just to see where you take it... |
| 2012-11-12 09:27:02 | The Librarian and the Bartender | Hey HP! You have nice, easy 'conversational' style of writing that makes your characters and situations believable and easy to relate to. Although your themes are not 'my thing' (I only looked you up out of curiosity!) I can see that you have talent in abundance. I foresee a long and successful XnXX story-writing career ahead of you. :-) |
| 2012-11-25 07:10:21 | The Shed Club. (Part One) | The conversational tone at the start of your story, coupled with the 'use your imagination' turned me off before I read very much more. I'm sorry, but if you want to write a story then WRITE THE STORY.; all of the extraneous stuff is annoying and distracting. It does not encourage reading on. From what I did read there is the basis of a good, sexy and interesting story. It's a pity that you have chosen to write it the way you have. May I suggest that, in future before you post any more stories, that you ask someone else to independently read and possibly critique your work? I would also urge you to read some of the work by the recommended writers on XnXX. It'll give you some indicators of how to write a better story. 6/10 |