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2009-08-20 02:28:42 My Disastrous Night I'm a sucker for a happy ending...go back to his wife.
2009-09-07 21:56:53 Moms night out One night when I was 12 my mother and her friend Monica were going to a party down the street from our house, since my mother rarely went anywhere and was no drinker, it was strange to see her so excited about going out, mom was very modest and sweet natured , she has a great body for a 30+ woman since I am the only son as I have two sisters, Mom is very close with me and always says things I can’t repeat to anyone, like she wants to have sex with our next door neighbor she says he is hot, I think he is a jerk.


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2009-09-07 22:28:44 Moms night out One night when I was 12 my mother and her friend Monica were going to a party down the street from our house, since my mother rarely went anywhere and was no drinker, it was strange to see her so excited about going out, mom was very modest and sweet natured , she has a great body for a 30+ woman since I am the only son as I have two sisters, Mom is very close with me and always says things I can’t repeat to anyone, like she wants to have sex with our next door neighbor she says he is hot, I think he is a jerk.


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2009-09-08 16:49:23 Is it so wrong Very nice. Keep writing.
2009-09-08 16:55:26 Ellen's Fantacy Ellen's Fantacy by Ellen340
Introduction: Ellen's bondage fantacy comes true
Ellen’s Fantacy

You misspelled fantasy three times in a row. That is not a very good way to start out a story.
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