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Comments from fbailey
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-12-02 10:04:13 | sex and the high school gril | I wish that the GAY issue had been more explicit in the beginning. Bi-sexual, Boys/Teen Female, just didn't do it for me. Sorry = negative. Besides all of that you are not very good with English or with writing. |
| 2013-08-26 15:14:41 | Catching the babysitter drinking | I hate ten inch cocks.... |
| 2013-09-02 00:07:47 | Nude Beach Sister | First off, you didn’t mention the GAY part. You kept saying meters and then at the end - feet. Also you never mentioned “part One†in the totle. Not a bad story but you certainly could have written more or even finishe it for your readers. |
| 2015-04-08 02:42:59 | Lost in Roman times pt-1 | . Let me start by saying that I very much enjoyed your story. Why is it that you do NOT put a space after a period or a comma? It would read a lot better if you would learn that simple fact. Perhaps if you proofread it you might find those yourself. . |
| 2015-11-04 02:36:09 | Come for a Coffee | This is unedited (other than fixing spelling mistakes): I might eventually edit it properly - but if I do, it will be for publication by some other means. You don't think that we are worth doing it right. |