| 2013-03-01 21:19:35 |
A River in Egypt
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Great story. Quite a bit of effort and skill displayed here. I'll probably have to start downloading your stories and dissecting them to see how I can make mine as good. |
| 2013-03-01 21:27:51 |
Good Golly, Mrs. Mommy!
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Excellent story! Awesome new writer! This site just got a bit more interesting (not to say that it wasn't interesting before). |
| 2013-03-08 00:26:46 |
MInding Others, part 1
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Very good twist ending for this first part. |
| 2013-03-08 00:29:18 |
Minding Others, part 2
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This is a great second part. |
| 2013-03-08 00:33:04 |
Minding Others, part 3
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Really good series. Enjoyable third part. |