| 2013-11-05 17:10:53 |
A Date with Mom_(0)
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Super hot story! Very good mom-son fucking. |
| 2013-11-13 16:37:53 |
Katherine and Hilary - chapter 1
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Very good face-fucking. You know how to write sex. I'm sure you will reward the reader with more character information in the next chapter. Personally, I would advise you to post these brief chapters on the sex stories forum. Once the word count goes past 5,000, you can post it as a complete story, first part, or first volume on the Stories Side here. But that is just my personal opinion. |
| 2013-11-13 16:40:49 |
Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 13: Senator
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Love this line "I'm evil, not uncivilized." Classic! The science and intelligence put into this entry and this entire series is astounding, not to mention how you deliciously pump sex into the mix. Even new characters are given as much attention as the ones that have been there for a while. Gruthsorik fucking that mature senator was very hot! Good stuff. Keep it up! |
| 2013-11-13 16:41:27 |
Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 14: Wolf
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Lots of science, lots of action, monster-on-monster sex - fun! Gruthsorik escapes. I wonder what the outside world has in store for him; better yet, who he's going to fuck next on the outside. All your chapters so far are excellent and flawless, but this one stands out. Superb! |
| 2013-11-13 16:46:27 |
Sex in the Graveyard_(0)
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Wow! Highly original work. Literate and very interesting. You were recommended by another member by the name of PrettyNun. That's how I came to read your story. I am not disappointed. Quite pleased actually. Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it a lot. |