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Comments from Norton5
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-11-24 17:38:54 | Me and Mr. Bill! Part 1 & 2_(3) | Excellently done. The words just flow along and I was swept away with the story. Highly erotic and charged with sex. Nice turn of events from sexual meeting into BDSM. I'm not a bondage fanatic, but you did it extremely well! Bill is a master dom and your protagonist is the perfect slut! 10/10 |
| 2013-11-24 17:41:02 | Me and Mr. Bill! Part 4: The Old Strip Club | Lots more erotic fun with more sluts thrown into the mix and more hardcore sex! Hot dancing in the club and hotter fucking in the VIP room. She is spoilt for cock, and those Texans got all the right tools and know-how. 10/10 |
| 2013-11-24 17:44:46 | Me and Mr. Bill Part 5: The Poker (Poke Her) Game | WOW! Looking forward to reading Part 6! I don't take for granted the fact that you write very good, not just the sex, but in every aspect of communicating your story to the reader. This series is a great one because of its readability and how you can engage the reader's mind, keeping their attention without wasting words on unnecessary and uninteresting things. You have a wonderful talent and it is utterly fantastic to have you here on XNXX. This part is longer and has a lot more sizzling-hot sex action in it. Nice incest going on within the larger story, handled with a deft hand. That "poke her" game was terrific! Descriptive writing at its best, particularly in their slut outfits and BDSM. Another thing I like about your writing is you give more than take. Addictive and rewarding storytelling. Thank you very much, RachJayne! |
| 2013-11-24 17:48:09 | Welcome Home_(3) | Coming home story well told with emotion and love. |
| 2013-11-24 17:49:09 | Breakdown_(0) | A really good cheating story. Mandy is hot and Reid is a lucky guy for that moment. Great sex! In my honest opinion, I felt like the ending was incomplete. All it needed was a teeny weeny little bit more, like when she saw Reid sitting and watching her, you also could have included her smiling and he smiling back and she performs especially for him. Maybe even quickly getting past the strip dance and she taking him home or he taking her home to his place afterward. The ending you have is kind of abrupt to me. I'm just saying. Anyway, I still like this one. |