| 2013-12-02 19:55:03 |
Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 2
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Your entries are way too short. Make them at least 5,000 words each. And put some sex in them. If this is a real incident you're relating here to us, and it doesn't contain any sex, I'm afraid it might not be too popular here on Stories Side, but you might get a better reception on XNXX Adult Forum in Sex Stories section there. |
| 2013-12-02 19:55:35 |
Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 3
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Good descriptions, generally well-written, but the same: too short in words and content and still no sex. Once again, maybe you should post all of this on the Sex Stories section in the XNXX Adult Forum. They are more tolerant of non-sex stories there, rather than here. |
| 2013-12-02 19:55:59 |
Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 4
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You have great talent in describing people and things. The protagonist is truly fleshed out in here; I see her as a real person caught up in a religious life she doesn't quite understand the full meaning of. She is also a very sexual being! |
| 2013-12-02 19:56:33 |
Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 5
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This is great. That pool fight and the telling of how Laura and Michael got into it was titillating with a touch of eroticism. Once again, you describe things so well and you also have much creativity inside of you (or is that what really happened with Laura?). Very good this time around. |
| 2013-12-02 19:59:07 |
Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 6
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Awesome! Some sex in this entry. Thank you! Keep it up. |