| 2010-07-04 14:14:29 |
spider man the beginning
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It's a cool idea I must admit. Very original. But just for the sake of the reader, try writing in word first, adding quotation marks for diologue, simple stuff like that. |
| 2011-08-18 12:46:52 |
MY TWIN SISTER, TARA - 2
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I do like a good sexually sadistic RA, always gets the blood movin. Nice twists! |
| 2011-08-18 14:02:27 |
My Girlfriend and My Sister...both want me!
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Dude, every part of that party scene was from my story... That's not called inspiration, that's called cut-and-paste. Like what you came up with yourself tho |