| 2020-06-04 13:16:11 |
Eva, the truck drivers wife
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You need to proof read better and learn to separate thoughts into multiple paragraphs. It's obvious that you love to write this stuff as your spelling and grammar is noticeably worse in the sexual de***********ions. The story is Great, and the premise is probably accurate. I'm sure there are a lot of long haul truckers with lonely promiscuous wives. So make the reader believe the story by making it easy to read and understand. The best method is to write your story and put it aside for a couple of days. Then re-read it, making corrections as you go. Repeat this three or four times before you publish. Good start! |