| 2018-01-17 16:42:57 |
TARYN'S OTHERLAND: Chapter 4
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great story....some of the best writing i have ever seen here anyway...can hardly wait to read chap 5.... |
| 2018-01-17 18:14:45 |
TARYN'S OTHERLAND: Chapter 4
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not enough warning i believe that the first two stories are set up and then yes not enough sex....but IF it was me i would not change a thing...it is a different type of story then a lot of porn readers are used to...if you had a brief forward saying what kind of story it is...i think the "negos" might just move on.... |
| 2018-01-17 22:12:53 |
TARYN'S OTHERLAND: Chapter 5
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it is going great....hope you keep it up... |
| 2018-01-17 23:28:22 |
TARYN'S OTHERLAND: Chapter 6
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i am still reading...i think it is pretty good...but it is not classic porn...it is still good... |
| 2018-01-18 20:10:32 |
TARYN'S OTHERLAND: Chapter 7
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i wondering how to classify this....it is well written...and contains pornographic elements....but this is not masturbatory material nor classic porn...don't get me wrong i like it...i am trying to decide if i love it...anyway well written all around...and trust me i am a dominant and a rape guy so this is definely not my cup of tea...still good work... |