| 2013-04-24 16:44:20 |
Finding my way back home, Parts 1 and 2 of 6
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Great story it could easily be a novel or movie |
| 2013-05-07 03:23:52 |
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Great story. I wonder where it would go if you continued. The mom pulling out a gun and blowing his brains away? Him ending up in prison? Them divorced and him never being able to see his daughter? Them talking about it over time and her joining in the incest fun? A lot of ways it could go. I just wonder, are you going to continue this? |
| 2013-05-07 16:16:29 |
My Nieces Three Part 1 - Rachel
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Good story, i like where this might go. |
| 2013-05-29 05:40:59 |
Bailing Shellie Out of Jail
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Great story, but too bad he hasn't been on here since 2006. |
| 2013-06-15 02:06:00 |
Twin Japanese Nieces PT20_(0)
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glad you continued writing. This is a great story. |