| 2013-09-01 15:28:29 |
My Daughters Best Friend Pt 1
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excellent, i hope you consider continuing this story. |
| 2013-09-01 15:38:13 |
My Daughter Decided That I was To Be Her First
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this one is begging for a part two. |
| 2013-09-18 12:28:01 |
My Virgin Sister : Chapter Three (Final Chapter)
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very hot, i'm ready for chapter 4. Keep up the good work, and great story telling. |
| 2013-10-09 18:42:34 |
The Heart-Lock Secret 3 (part 2)
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Interesting finish. I think it would have flowed better if it didn't include all the weird imagery. It made me think of Sgt. Peppers, the Beatles version not the Bee Gees version. |
| 2013-10-15 19:01:35 |
Amanda and her Amazing Life: part 1
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I'm ready for part 2 |