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Comments from Jeymar
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| 2013-09-01 05:19:33 | A negative comment written under the cover of anonymity is like writing an anonymous letter. It's just a piece of shit, as said one of the commentator. Put a name on your comment,, and I'll consider it. Otherwise, it doesn't deserve any respect. |
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| 2013-11-11 19:42:35 | Katherine and Hilary - chapter 1 | Well written story. After your comment, I'm not sure anymore about my first impression that, that was his wife. Looking forward to the development of future add-ons. Keep it up. I detected a few, but very few typos and change of tense ( we all make them), but nothing to distract from the plot. |
| 2015-06-09 14:30:22 | Samantha finds Trouble | The idea of the story is good. But like the previous reader, I suggest you proofread your text, format it so the paragraphs are shorter. Many have problems with your, you're, yours and your's, along with there, their, they're and many incorrect ways of writing what we truly mean. Use Google to check the meaning of a word before using it. It will pop up a dictionary with a definition of it's meaning. This is just a positive criticism to help you put out better texts in the future. Don't give up writing, practice will get you closer to perfection. :0 |
| 2015-06-09 14:13:25 | Samantha finds Trouble | The idea of the story is good. But like the previous reader, I suggest you proofread your text, format it so the paragraphs are shorter. Many have problems with your, you're, yours and your's, along with there, their, they're and many incorrect ways of writing what we truly mean. Use Google to check the meaning of a word before using it. It will pop up a dictionary with a definition of it's meaning. This is just a positive criticism to help you put out better texts in the future. Don't give up writing, practice will get you closer to perfection. :0 |
| 2015-06-12 06:25:43 | A Boy and his Genie - Chapter 12 | This is a great plot, no matter if some would like more sex. There is more than sex in any interesting story. I think you have a good balance between the plot to keep us on edge, plus the occasional sex for those who only look for a wanking tale. There is so much potential here, you could write multiple books with all the ideas that pop up. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. |