| 2014-07-28 23:45:56 |
Gone to the Dogs (pt. 1)
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If that's the only problem you have with my story I'll take that as a positive note. Thanks |
| 2015-08-10 03:20:09 |
Kinky Vanilla: Prologue
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A fantastic start. Love the story line so far. |
| 2015-10-21 17:37:37 |
Tristen, My Daughter's Friend (chapter 1)
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don't worry about what anonymous readers bitch about! The story was great. A few mistakes but nothing serious enough to take away from the 'scene'. If you'd like I believe there are people on here that can proof read your stories for you. But 2 errors are nothing to be worried about. Your spacing was excellent and that is the biggest challenge. I look forward to more. Great start |
| 2015-10-21 18:08:43 |
ANAL DESIRES
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Your story seemed very good. Just work on your spacing. IE sentences, and individual thoughts should have their own paragraph. Don't worry about how long it seems. It will read much better. I got the same advice. Apparently 'the wall of text' is a turn off. Nice start though |
| 2015-11-05 20:35:13 |
My Daughter's Phone (pt 4)_(1)
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Read the first three parts |