| 2014-05-05 15:41:48 |
Road Trip part 5
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Hey poi I kinda agree with puppetmaster on the cliff-hanger but do add a certain amount of supense so am 50/50 but its mind blown awesome part to an amazing story of guy and co but dont go overboard with it |
| 2014-04-26 21:45:34 |
Road Trip part 4
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Oh my fuckin god mind blown with the finish and another awesome chapter now am really eager to to see what happens next |
| 2014-04-19 19:29:43 |
Putting A Bitch In Her Place
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Hey great story ur a gifted writer keep it up |
| 2014-08-25 05:59:08 |
Path to Our Future part 3
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Well said poi |
| 2014-08-29 20:28:24 |
Path to Our Future part 4
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One word EPIC |