| 2020-09-21 19:17:53 |
Bully Revenge, Pt.1
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Revenge is a bitch. Good story. If you can think of a good story line. Keep on going. |
| 2020-09-21 19:20:46 |
Bully Revenge, Pt.1
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Sorry! You did, but where's part 2? |
| 2020-10-02 19:29:13 |
Masturbating with Amy, Chapter One
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Good start! Keep going. |
| 2020-10-02 20:50:48 |
The Curer 2220 part 1
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Pretty funny and reasonable sci-fi. Pretty short. Look forward to next chspter. |
| 2020-10-02 23:21:00 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 1
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This was a great story AND more believable than most of the stories on this website. The trick is to write chap 2 in a way that generates suspension of disbelief or rather continues it. |