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Comments from mod_man
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-01-16 21:32:35 | I Like to Watch Boys Masturbate | If you write your story on a tablet, you can cut and oaste in into the story window on the internet. I assume you know this, but you may not have realized that you can save it in the story window, then proofread it to your hearts content, there, and when you publish it, it will be exactly the way you want. If you set your tablet word processor to 'word wrap', it should automatically wrap around as you get to the edge of your document, and thus not require a carriage return until the end of th paragraph. Then at the end of the paragraph, you can enter two carriage returns to provide an empty line, between paragraphs. Good luck, I liked your story and I hope you write some more. |
| 2014-01-16 21:36:23 | I Like to Watch Boys Masturbate | BTW, I like motorcycles too, Read The Shaman. It starts out with a motorcycle trip to Sturgis. |
| 2014-02-27 08:40:52 | The weekend to remember, chapter 1-3 | Great story. Your English isn't perfect, but I liked it . For some reason, I can't vote, but you deserve a much better rating. |
| 2015-11-17 14:32:08 | The Jaguar Shaman II | This series deserves to be continued. but you more than occasionally leave a word out so you should proof read it several times before publishing it. Also you shoulde consider putting spaces between paragraphs. There is a very good document on this website advising how to make your story more readable. very good story though! |
| 2015-11-17 14:26:43 | The Jaguar Shaman II | This series deserves to be continued. but you more than occasionally leave a word out so you should proof read it several times before publishing it. Also you should consider putting spaces between paragraphs. There is a very good document on this website advising however to mak i |