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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-09-07 07:10:41 | Poolside Taboo._(1) | "Poolside Taboo" - Twenty Year Old Son/Brother, Nick and Eighteen Year Old Daughter/Sister, Heidi And Forty-three Year Old Fertile Single/Widowed/Divorced (??) Mother, Unnamed. My favorite blood-kin incestuous relationship. Fuck both sister and mother, with mother's explicit permission....and nine months later now forty-four year old mother has a son, Larry (Lawrence, I presume) and several days later sister Heidi has twin girls, Bianca and Megan. The family doubles in size within just a couple days. The story is very short on detail, not well written and spotty sentence structure. Although, the story theme, context and three babies outcome are fantastic and totally awesome!! |
| 2016-05-14 00:16:48 | Sexy Sisters and Mom - 2! | "Sexy (Twin) Sisters And Mom - (Pt) 2 [Parenthesis by reader]" - Widowed Thirties Year Old Horny Mother, Teenage Twin Daughters. Katie and Jamie and Teenage Care-free Horn-dog Son, Andy". Spell checking will never cure the careless writing issues of this writer. There are many, if not hundreds, of correctly spelled words that are used incorrectly! A very few examples are, 'my' instead of 'her', 'hear' instead of 'heard', 'min' instead of 'mom', 'there' instead of 'they're' and 'all' instead of 'call'!! Additionally, there are hundreds of instances of missing words, many times a missing key word that changes the meaning and/or intent of a particular sentence! Normally I'm very forgiving of several missteps and grammatical errors--even the best writers and publishers of great historical works are not error-free. Of the approximate dozen stories I've read of this writer there seems to no help on the horizon for his lack of writing skills! His themes are great though!! |
| 2016-08-25 02:46:38 | Something with my Sister Deb | "Something With My Sister Deb" - Sixteen Year Old Non-virgin Brother, Unnamed And Fifteen Year Old Virgin Sister, Debbie. The gist and premise of the story is sweet, somewhat innocent and rather romantic, to the extent of a burgeoning sexual relationship for young, teenage siblings, as they question and explore each other's bodies. The remainder of the story, to me, is along the same lines as reader/commenter 'luvsalik' (2015-04-06) in that it does fall short of expectations. To the naysayers and foul-mouth turds that can't find something at least constructive to say--and don't (or can't) read the story subject matter--I say fuck 'em! They'd be better served to read 'Little Red Riding Hood' or 'Jack and Jill', and leave us adults to our own joyful devices!! |
| 2016-08-25 00:59:34 | Hiking in the Mountains | "Hiking In The Mountains" - Thirty-six Year Old Divorced (Lonely) Mother, Unnamed and Eighteen Year Old Virgin Son, David (Dave). First I am a purist when it comes to incest. Mother and her son's sexual tryst, escapades and consummations were utterly fantastic...although I am not a fan of shit fucking nor of making a big deal of excrement and pissing. I'm of the same opinion of many other incest reading lovers, and that is there is no mention nor discussion about birth protection. My fantasy and fetish (and my heart) imagines Dave's mother with hundreds of millions virile sperm of Dave's pussy-pounding swimming up her baby channel looking for an egg to implant!! Though the writer is somewhat English challenged, and with jerky reading, and some re-reading, was able to finish the story. Advice? Have someone read the story aloud back to you exactly as written, might improve proper word usage, pluralization and punctuation. |
| 2016-08-23 05:32:27 | Caught II | "Caught II" - Forty-one (Or Forty-three??) Year Old Married Mother, Kathy (Kat) and Sixteen (?) Year Old Son, Robert (Bobby).. Mother Kathy has finally relinquished her pussy to her son's suddenly found aggression! Though she appears to Bobby (purposely on her part) to be stern and reluctant, throwing her faux guilt back on Bobby in order to alleviate her wanting him to fuck her pussy raw, she has what she wants but doesn't want her son to know her real feelings! The writer has done a marvelous job of dealing with the unique divergent emotions of mother Kathy versus son Bobby. She doesn't want to appear the aggressor or wanting Bobby's dick up her cunt, but she gets deviously what she wants, loving it, but Bobby has no idea of her emotions nor feelings. Great job of writing the character's roles and parts, their emotions, feelings and keeping each off balance--but each of them get what they need, want and greatly appreciate!! Take a bow, 'Aperv2'! |