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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2016-08-19 00:07:08 | Shipwrecked Pt. 2 | "Shipwrecked - P. 02" - The Jones Family: Late-thirties Father, Mr Jones Lost In The Forest And Thirty -six Year Old Mother, Trish And Eighteen Year Old, Lauren And Sixteen Year Old, Ryan And Fourteen Year Old, Molly. It appears I'm the only reader to not only show appreciation to the story but also the only reader to comment since September 2012!! What gives?? Not to be crass nor disparagingly negative, but the over abundance of shit fucking could be one possible effect. I recall reading this story elsewhere, a complete story without Parts or Chapters, and I don't recall such an "overload" of cock in the shit-chute!! I read stories--great, pure and realistic, blood-kin--for the most part of incest conducted with and by the sexual, God-given genitalia...penis, cock, dick, whacker penetrating the vagina, pussy, poontang, baby-tube, hole, etc! The gist, context and theme of this story is idealistic, and could be a real occurrence, but with natural-organ, orifice sex!! |
| 2016-08-18 02:41:01 | A Lifelong Affair pt. 3 | "A Lifelong Affair - Pt. 03" - Twenty-one Year Old Maritally-engaged Brother, Kevin and Twenty Year Old Married Sister, Lilly. As I commented three years ago, after reading the first time, the story context and to some extent even the subject, appears for the most part to have no connection to the previous two segments! Additionally, several--more than three or four--sentences do not make any sense, partially due to missing commas (,)--the separation of 'thought processes or change of thought direction--which would have been less confusing with proper punctuation. I'm not beating up on the writer; my comments, to be perfectly frank and honest, is only for the purpose of constructive criticism--not to degrade nor diminish the story nor the writer!! Throughout, there are many examples and traits of brilliant writing, both now and future writing potential. Taking constructive criticism as a positive will only make the writer a much better writer. Keep on, keeping on!! |
| 2016-08-18 01:23:49 | A Lifelong Affair pt. 2 | "A Lifelong Affair Pt. 02" - Twenty-one Year Old Brother. Kevin and Twenty Year Old Sister,Lilly. (NOTE: Part 01 that is now missing and no longer available on this Pornographic Website, indicated Kevin as Twelve Years Old and sister Lilly as Eleven Years Old). In sentences, paragraphs and conversationally this story is well structured. The major problem is with the use of words incorrectly, examples are 'there' vs 'they're', 'through' vs 'threw' more than several times, and there are too many commas (,) missing, in many sentences to having to reread four or five times to get the meaning or intention of what the 'character' was saying. However, having read this story almost three years ago (September 2013) my opinions and feelings abut the story have NOT diminished one iota!! I am very annoyed (with the Website) for their weakness and fear of pre-adolescent ages of characters! Keep up the GREAT writing; your ideas themes and context is very good!! |
| 2016-08-17 01:26:39 | The Shipwreck Pt. 1 | (The) Shipwrecked - Pt. 1" - The Jones Family: Late-thirties Year Old Married Father, Mr. Jones And Thirty-six Year Old Mother, Trish Jones; Eighteen Year Old Daughter, Lauren; Sixteen Year Old Son, Ryan and Fourteen Year Old Daughter, Molly Jones. This being at least the third time reading this marvelous story, which is actually FICTION and FANTASY!! Some Anonymous reader's comments criticize the story without realizing the nature of the story, the sexual nurturing aspect of the Website and story offerings thereof!! Those critics should be constructive, in the least, but also be reasonable in the matter they criticize! This story is absolutely magnificent is it's total delivery, the context and theme! The characters and their dialogue and actions, and more importantly, their results of those actions...free spirit life style, incestuous pregnancies and love of all family members are the subject(s) we readers want and expect, with good quality delivery!! |
| 2016-08-16 08:22:11 | Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover | "Babysitting The Twins Again - Part 3" The Cast Of Characters Are Delineated At The Story's Beginning. I'm very into blood-kin incest, usually a male/female romantic and love committed. Occasionally a third blood-kin relative and even rarely a fourth blood-kin relative can enhance, not slutty nor pornographically obscene, the warm and caring story byline, context and theme of a true and honest incest story! When "outsiders," (i.e., threesomes, foursomes non-blood relations) are brought into the story/scene I'm off to search for stories of my liking. I did not read beyon the introductions/biographies. |