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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2016-10-01 07:01:48 | Sara's Protective Dad part 1 corrected | "Sara's Protective Dad - Part 1 (Corrected)" - Mid-thirties Year Old Father Robert Winfield and Fifteen Year Daughter, Sara Winfield. March 2014, I originally read this story. There are numerous issues I've noticed since first reading; my original comments still apply though. Early on, as you imagined Sara's early life flashing through your mind, you mention buying Sara's first 'tampons' but three quarters through the story, you're sure she's still a virgin. If she has used tampons she "ain't" virgin!! There are not many misspelled words. However there are MANY correctly spelled words but used in the wrong place, wrong subject, wrong context, i.e., you mentioned being b-o-r-e-d (bored) but you spelled it b-o-a-r-d (board: a piece of wood)!! Have an English speaker read the story aloud to another person of English as their first language; they will know the ridiculousness of screwed up first, second, third person dialogue, many different sentence meanings, etc., etc!! |
| 2016-10-04 02:54:16 | First Time With Mom_(0) | "First Time With Mom" - Fourteen Year Old Novice Virgin Son, Jake and Thirty-nine Year Old Fertile Divorced Mother, Unnamed. Talk about "a quickie", both literally and figuratively, this story... and male character son, Jake did an initial teaser--the shortness of the story with minimal details and the quick "dip" of Jake's wiener-dick into his mother's pussy--son's dick in, barely, two/three pumps, blow his wad, and out; and the story teased with one very small, minimal stick of the dick into momma's pussy, small amount but enough ejaculate to impregnate his Unnamed mother...and eight or eight and half months later a daughter/sister is born! Unfortunately for the expecting-more readers, there is no more fucking, loving, foreplay, blowjob(s) nor pussy-eating after the initial and once only impregnation shot!!! Though short, quick and lacking, the story could have had merit worthy of some praise, though Jake did, if but only once, fuck his mother. |
| 2016-10-04 03:04:15 | Real: First Time With My Mom | "Real: First Time With My Mom (23 September 2012)" - Fourteen Year Old Novice Virgin Son, Jake and Thirty-nine Year Old Fertile Divorced Mother, Unnamed. See my comments at the end of "First Time With Mom" posted 28 June 2011. |
| 2016-10-04 04:10:46 | Mommy Tries To Resist | "Mommy Tries To Resist" - Seventeen Year Old Virgin(?) Son, Unnamed and Thirty-eight Year Old Divorced Mother, Helen. One, all story characters should be named; Two, the story tags say "Blowjob" and "Pregnant"; and Three, There is no discussion nor details about future lucking(s), and no mention whether fertile mother got pregnant, or not, from the first two bareback non-protected fertile mother and virgin virile son's consummated couplings?? No Pregnancy, no Blowjob, no son's name, no future fucking(s), etc!! No much likeeee story (wording and spelling of this last sentence purposely done)! |
| 2016-10-04 06:29:41 | My Mom Saw Me Naked! | "My Mom Saw Me Naked"- Fourteen Year Old Very Novice Virgin Son, Danny and Mid-thirties Year Old Married Mother, Unnamed. It appears that, since 28 years have passed since your first and supposedly only consummated fuck with your mother; now at 42 years old, it appears your mother most probably died early, maybe in her early 60's or so years old. Since you and mother almost calmly and casually had that first fuck, it's odd that more and/or many couplings did not occur ever again!!! I'm sure other readers join me in expressing condolences at the loss of your mother; the loss of any parent is an emotional, sad and sometimes, unexpected trauma!! I was never so fortunate to have fucked my mother. She did give me baths until I was almost six years old; we knowingly saw each other naked. Until I was in my teens she often played with my dick, but we never fucked! I wish I'd had the 'nads to fuck her--if we could only turn back the clock!! We coulda, we shoulda! |