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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-08-04 18:54:32 | Staying close to my sister (and mom) part 2 | "Staying Close To My Sister (And Mom) Part 2" - Twenty Year Old Brother/Son Stud, Ray Davis And Eighteen Year Old Adolescent Sister/Daughter, Elizabeth Davis And Thirty-eight Year Old Sexually-starved Divorced Mother, Judith Davis. As far as and to the extend of the genre "incest", Part 1 of this story is/was great! As to the genre of "incest" this Part 2 (in total) is nothing short of a heterosexual, NON-incest stroke story. The inclusion and addition of non-family, non-blood-kin (and specifically for prurient purposes) sex fuck buddies, ala (so-called) co-workers Karen and Trisha, detracted greatly from the incest aspects of what could be a fabulous incestuous family--mother, son and daughter--story! My reading of this story is specifically and intentionally for the Davis' family life, aspects, dalliances, family life style, loves and pregnancies of the blood-kin female characters. This story goes far beyond the boundaries of incestuous male and female blood-kin family! |
| 2017-10-01 07:35:47 | Avery | "Avery" - Fifteen and Two-thirds Year Old Daughter, Avery And Thirty-six Year Old Father, Unnamed. Though it doesn't seem possible, I'm more enthralled and appreciative of this story after a second reading, due to the excellence of writing and chronology of events; the character's personalities and emotions are absolutely perfect in style and tenor! You are a brilliant writer, 'Muke Hunt Hz', and purveyor of beautiful "penmanship", plot and theme construction. Although not looking for errors nor mistakes I recall only one word, "threw" was misspelled as "through." Such near-perfection is an unusual feat in it's self. Before the good Lord reclaims your soul you must write a sequel of Avery and her family. Although sexual relationships with any other family members is not necessary (though would be welcome), just the technique of your writing and stylistic word development would make reading another chapter extremely enjoyable and worthwhile!!! |
| 2017-10-02 06:53:25 | Cherry(chapter 1) | "Cherry (Chapter 1)" - Mid-twenty Year Old David Mann and Nineteen Year Old Cherry. Obviously a very tender, thought-provoking story of a young male and tender, who are sensitive to each other, and care very deeply for the feelings of each other.The story has a even flow of messaging, without the elusive messaging of washboard, bumpy non-compatible couples and their trials and tribulations. The story does slow down in some areas, however David and Cherry are always mindful of each others feelings, and the pleasures they convey to each other. |
| 2017-10-02 23:38:34 | Accidents Happen_(2) | "Accidents Happen" - Thirty-seven Year Old Married Mother (of Seventeen Year Old Son, Jeremy and Daughters, Sixteen Year Old, Jessica and Fourteen Year Old, Miranda) Rebecca. Mother Rebecca appears to be into her second period of sexual awakening with it also being a period of (her husband's) marital sexual neglect. She wastes no time in satisfying her sexual, and maybe emotional and needy gratification. Her opportunities and needs are present within her home (rather than extra-marital outside the home) with her son's new ventures with condoms! English appears to not be the writer/author's first (nor maybe even second) language. Although the story is quite good in and of it's self, it is confusing within some of the written elements of the story. Since the story was posted approximately nine and half months ago, there is (still) a possibility, or maybe a probability, of a second chapter, or sequel, to this first story version. The story did end rather abruptly!!! |
| 2017-10-19 10:07:21 | The Unexpected_(0) | "The Unexpected" - Fifteen Year Old Very Adolescent Virgin Teen, Unnamed and A Wayward Great Dane Male Dog, "James". The young lady has lost her virginity to a massive great dane, that followed her home. She's devastated at first...but after the dog does his initial fuck of her young pussy, she finds finds he's just what she needed to satisfy her young, budding sexual libido!! The "deed" was short and sweet, but is was fucking (literally) hot. |