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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2015-08-06 22:21:43 | Desire her or fear her, Part 03: The cycle is complete | @Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-06 17:56:34 I accept your words, and like I said, I appreciate the feedback, because that is how you get better at something: By realising your mistakes and correcting them in the future. This particular story is not longer than this (it was one of my first attempts at writing), and I won’t add onto it, as I feel that it should end where it originally did. I have about 30 other stories either completed, or half-done, but none of those are ready to be released, at least not yet. I will probably check my drive and see what I can upload next, but much of it is pretty similar in storyline, and I would prefer to make something different next time, so that my audience won’t get bored of hearing the same sh*t over and over. If you checked my other uploads, you will see how poorly they are made grammatically compared to this one, and I actually feel slightly disappointed in my own effort back then. We are only humans it seems :P |
| 2015-08-06 03:33:27 | Desire her or fear her, Part 03: The cycle is complete | @Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-06 00:10:10 As pointed out in earlier comments, made in my other stories, I am from a non-english speaking contry, so my grammar is never going to be spot on. I try to be gramtically correct, but sometimes I fail, and I realise that. As for your doubt about me writing the first part, yes I did write it. But it was written years ago, and a lot the things in part 2+3 has been altered kinda heavily from their original version, where I kept the first chapter pretty much the same. Perhaps i should have kept it more true to my original idea, but this is how I kinda felt it had to be. You can like it, or not. It's your own call. I appreaciate your feedback, and will try to fix some of the things you pointed out. Have a good day. |