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Comments from linky_fangs
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-12-30 02:49:56 | The Sixth Prince - Part 2 | I have disabled comments for anonymous readers because of the spamming ads. I would still love to hear feedback and opinions though, so don't hesitate to pm (Private Message) me on my profile. Have fun and read on! <3 linky_fangs |
| 2013-12-30 02:50:30 | The Sixth Prince | I have disabled comments for anonymous readers because of the spamming ads. I would still love to hear feedback and opinions though, so don't hesitate to pm (Private Message) me on my profile. Have fun and read on! <3 linky_fangs |
| 2014-01-27 19:32:31 | Eleven | I thought that was brilliant! Very well done and a cute twist at the end. Sex can be the most challenging part of writing an erotic story, as it all depends on viewpoint and experience. You did very well, but could still improve on some of your descriptions and details. If you would like some tips or ideas, I'd be happy to help. Just leave a comment on one of my stories or PM me on my profile and I'll reply shortly. <3 linky_fangs |
| 2014-01-01 19:41:28 | Castlewars faction | If you posted this in English, I think you would get better results. <3 linky_fangs |
| 2015-08-31 05:29:40 | Aliens - Breeding and Birth | Very interesting, I quite enjoyed that. I especially liked the details and explanation of the birthing process. Very minor gramatical errors, well done! I wish you would have put more detail into the aliens themselves, as all I could picture about their appearance was the two tentacles and even so, I had to use my imagination about the colour and where they came from. Perhapd adding a little more emotion and depth to the female character would add to the tale as well. Take your time and let the reader truly live the story, not just read it. Picture all your senses (sight, sound, touch, taste) and emotions of your characters in each of the individual scenarios. Keep writing, listening to feedback, and learning. You're a great writer sweetheart! <3 linky_fangs |