| 2014-11-20 21:52:38 |
Bruce and Selena
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You're a fine writer, Stillers7. Excellent writing here. |
| 2014-07-18 19:32:31 |
The Ticket XIV & XV
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Definitely interesting. |
| 2014-07-18 19:33:41 |
The Speachless Virgin
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I really really like this short text. Good job! |
| 2014-10-31 10:04:01 |
Dracula's Daughter
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I liked the brief coffin humor earlier in the story. You wrote the countess, her mannerisms, and effect on other people so well. Professor Van Helsing was impressive. The sex scenes were truly erotic without being crude porno; in other words, brilliant (I wish I could write sex scenes like that). Great pocket reasoning on a/theism. The creepy and scary content was excellently done. Whopping climax. Disregarding some typos, this story is a great Halloween treat. It should be made (or remade) into a mini movie. |
| 2014-12-05 05:35:37 |
Kaw#2 - Seabreeze
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Awesome erotic/future/temporal sci-fi written in a creative storm: biological projection of the ship's computer core in the form of a gorgeous woman; passive equality laws; shuttle craft second wife; threesome inferno; altering of the time line . . . . Interesting, mentally stimulating, entertaining, sexy, and very well done as usual for this author. |