| 2014-11-29 20:19:18 |
WHORE WIFE_(0)
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Good story. I just wished you had put a blank line after every paragraph for easier reading. When you submit stories here, indentation is not followed, nor is double spacing between words, so writers always press the enter (or return) key at least once after each paragraph. There were also other errors in the story, but I was still able to understand what you were saying. Again, good story. I liked it. |
| 2014-07-18 19:41:42 |
Raping Roz Doyle 2: The Friends
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Better written than the first part. Really good. |
| 2014-07-18 15:19:00 |
My date with Michelle Trachtenberg
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I liked it. But please double space between paragraphs. Good story. |
| 2014-07-18 15:17:09 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR, OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!
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I agree. This is a worthy re-post of an XNXX classic story. |
| 2014-07-18 19:40:26 |
Cougar In The Yukon
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Very good MILF story. |