| 2014-07-23 08:54:36 |
Keeping on the Team Chapter 2
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Loved how you maintained the realism here. Lacey's still regretting and still not happy about this situation and where it's taking her. The change of setting was great, her going into the city to star in a porn video. You've taken us into this seedy (pun intended) realm of mass adult video distribution and the insignificance of one girl losing her innocence for the sexual gratification of immoral people and financial profit for a porn business. Super blowjob scene with Morrow. Once again, the realism such as how Lacey feels at being treated like this makes the story hotter and more respectable (that last word sounds weird). Sizzling lesbian scene with Heather. The following threesome was a knockout. I just can't praise you enough on how well-written Lacey is as a character, especially her thoughts and emotions. It's a sad ending to this chapter for Lacey, but a win win for the readers and the writer. Bravo for a Super Sex Story, LOAnnie! |
| 2014-07-23 08:23:26 |
Keeping on the Team Chapter 1
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I am impressed by the way you wrote this text, LOAnnie. Generally quite similar to many other stories with the same themes, but so excellently written and exciting that I relished every sentence and plot turn. The realism is one thing that I admired. Lacey is not a slut and she doesn't agree with what's happening. She doesn't become slutty on the inside, but Coach T coerces her into doing slutty things. Nice surprise ending to the chapter. Awesome story. You're undeniably one of our best sex storytellers. This story deserves a lot more votes. |
| 2014-07-23 04:10:42 |
Debt and its high price part 6 (re-release)
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Looking forward to part 7. |
| 2014-07-23 04:09:40 |
Debt and its high price part 3 : A walk down memory lane
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Keep it up. |
| 2014-07-23 04:08:07 |
Damien's Game
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I love it. You do the fucking and the intensity of the atmosphere/situations so good. I am amazed and impressed by your style of extreme sex storytelling. |