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Comments from Norton X
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-07-21 04:13:43 | Holly's Holes - Chapter 1 | I too enjoyed this hot incest story. Very good work. |
| 2014-07-20 17:13:20 | I'm Being Blackmailed_(1) | Hot story and well-written. Thanks. |
| 2014-07-22 06:46:32 | My night with Colin | Fantastic side trip from the main story "Soccer Mom and a Bully". Loved it. |
| 2014-07-19 13:11:06 | Emma Watson Chapter 3 | Superb celebrity sex fiction. |
| 2014-11-30 21:59:47 | Take it Easy - Chapter One: Schooled by a Girl | Pardon me for running out of votes for today, but I hope you can still accept my comment, Zxno. Aaron has an awesome personality and sense of humor. The blowjob was written really good. I was hoping Emily and Aaron would continue their banter and camaraderie for a while longer before getting sexual, but if this is how you intended for the story to go, I have no complaints. I just thought it would be great to have a longer buildup and more work put into developing their relationship prior to their sexing. It seems that you've invested more in sex than non-sexual character interplay. That's perfectly fine, since this is a sex story site. I just had a higher expectation for you because you started out so well and got Aaron and Emily to a good start. Your writing in regards to spelling and grammar is flawless, meaning I didn't detect any obvious errors while reading. Good story. |