| 2014-10-03 02:15:01 |
The Dance of Death
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Nice. Well written. |
| 2015-01-02 20:15:35 |
In the World of Women (part 8)
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I like it when a writer really invests in his or her story. Seems like you've been doing that throughout this series. Very good. Just one tip: Find some way to make your really large paragraphs smaller so readers can read more easily. This is a good series. |
| 2015-01-02 20:19:53 |
Kristen's Hidden Fetish
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I liked it. Don't be afraid to post longer stories. |
| 2015-01-02 20:23:49 |
The Iron Maiden of Caen
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I agree with the anonymous reader above: insert a blank line between paragraphs. This site doesn't do tabbing or indentation. I liked the story. |
| 2015-01-02 20:24:37 |
The Iron Maiden of Caen
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Sorry. Anonymous reader below. LOL. I keep thinking I'm posting on the forum. |