| 2015-06-18 03:35:39 |
The Ambitious Freshman
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Quickly went through this story, but I can tell from the structure of the text and some of the sentences that is extremely good. |
| 2015-09-24 07:23:55 |
ON ROYAL PALM ESATE Part One: Happenings between a man and a woman
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This story was well done and I could truly feel the atmosphere even though it was a short story. Good work. |
| 2015-10-04 12:03:33 |
Triangle_(1)
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Thank you, Miss K. |
| 2015-10-01 22:11:20 |
Triangle_(1)
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Thank you, Countrycadillac, for reading, voting, and taking the time to comment. Your work on this site is much appreciated. I will take your suggestion into consideration. I agree that this story does need a few more chapters. |
| 2015-10-01 08:26:06 |
Dead Stick 2
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Nice to see you following up on this story, Pars. |