| 2014-05-07 05:58:37 |
Boy in the grass 53
|
I'm hoping it's hormonal imbalance that Emma's going through due to her not knowing she's pregnant that she's getting more bitchy, and seeming to take more liberties. At first I was thinking Amy was going through a little jealousy, because of Becca's constant needing to be the center of attention constantly, later on, at least you explained her apprehensions of the plan. Becca's having to be involved in every single aspect of everyone is getting too much, I hate to say it.... she's gotta go. This really seems to be just getting to be more of a free for all fuck fest instead of the love driven story line it was, there isn't any intimacy anymore. Poor Marge and June have to be going insane with Becca's constant interference, they've had no time at all with Max. I know you know where you're going with the storyline, and have faith that it'll all be resolved, but, the lack of true affection any more is showing..... Bigman7307 |
| 2014-01-10 00:41:00 |
A Kind Stranger (The Whole Story)
|
The underlying love story is amazing, love it, keep writing. |
| 2014-01-23 16:49:23 |
Sis Comes Home for Memorial Day Part IV
|
I agree, no swapping, it only seems to cheapen the emotions of the lovers, however, possibly lead into the Spencer's relationship, possibly finding they are much more alike than they had suspected. Another sibling couple? It is obvious tho, that there is love between Missy, Shawn, and Amy, if done tastefully, it won't detract from the dynamic. I love the stories, please don't stop, they are most enjoyable. |
| 2014-01-30 20:18:49 |
KB and Me_(0)
|
Due to the stupid spammers, I've set comments to only registered users, if you have something valid to say about the story content or my writing, I'm open to suggestions, if you just want to spam, sorry, not on my story. |
| 2014-03-13 03:51:43 |
Seeing Matt's Stars: Part 3
|
I love your style SS, keep writing, I really can't wait to hear more about all of it. Your stories take the pace that a real life situation should, instead of just throwing them together and expecting anything to truly last. Bravo, and thank you so much. |