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Comments from pnut007z
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-24 14:33:51 | Being More Social - Chapter 8 | Read this til 7:30 am so tired now but it was great so realistic probably my second favorite chapter next to the graveyard one still by far your best scene hands down. Had one tiny detail a miss in your story wasn't Megan a virgin no blood or hymen breaking? Other then that I do enjoy how you make one wait for sex til the end a quite entertaining way to go about things :) |
| 2014-09-02 10:30:43 | The Wedding Reception-Chapter 2 | I voted positive even though there is the massive wall of text which made it harder to read and the spelling errors, but I think if you built up the characters more before just having them meet and fuck it would have been better I mean why does she like him is he attractive? ? It wasn't mentioned in the story and why would she let him fuck her in the ass there was no dialog really when it came to the sex I think more small details like that will help you in the future. sent from Samsung Note 2 |
| 2014-09-22 02:11:20 | Morning Bells (Part Seven: Big Bang) | Not sure when I will have the time |
| 2014-09-25 16:01:45 | Morning Bells (Part Eight) | Yeah definitely some fond memories but i would give up all the girls during and after to have brooke back pretty much out of my hands that relationship went... i was actually just recently going through all my old pictures from that time to try to spark my memories for further assistance with the chapters. |
| 2014-09-16 23:46:20 | Morning Bells (Part Seven: Big Bang) | Sunshine sorry that you didn't like that part but hear this Tommy is a teenager in this series Inna is a very attractive girl and to top it off Tommy and her are on exctasy. Not trying to bea dick here but if youve ever rolled in your life I highly doubt that you would be able to control yourself let alone even care about cheating it's all very realistic and you should understand that life is like the comment below not all flowers and BJ's lol |