| 2014-09-05 11:42:54 |
Morning Bells (Part Four: Chicago)
|
When you say it could have been better what is it exactly that I could have done to make it better for you? |
| 2014-09-23 11:05:05 |
Morning Bells (edited for spacing)
|
Sorry i do better with each chapter. It had been a while since I've written so please cut me some slack ... |
| 2014-09-01 22:45:02 |
Morning Bells (Part Three: The Asian girl)
|
Sorry if I used that to try to snag new viewers, but I wanted to put a little emphasis on her since she's going to become a main character |
| 2014-09-06 05:17:04 |
Morning Bells (Part Four: Chicago)
|
Yeah my bad I try my best with the proof reading I should have had my friend read it and edit the little mistakes before posting it but I was kind of overly excited when I finished and wanted to get it out so my readers could get there fix |
| 2014-09-01 11:57:29 |
Hitting the Curve (Chapter 1)
|
If you liked his work you might enjoy mine too :) keep up the good writing man! |