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Comments from Sinturian
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-08-30 11:41:51 | Party_(0) | Delicious...very descriptive. You have a way with words . Sinturian |
| 2008-09-01 12:29:34 | The Traffic Stop | To the person who attempted to correct my spelling... "knight" = armored warrior on horseback "night" = period of darkness between sunset and sunrise Spelling in this story is correct, but thank you for trying. Sinturian |
| 2008-09-11 23:32:38 | Molly's Surprise Visitor | Molly, A very good start, and generally well written. There were a few small spelling errors, but overall, well organized and sensual. It was a turnon, and I think most guys would be aroused. Try a little more proofing before you post, and as you can see from the end result, put an extra space between paragraphs. Loved the story, too. Sinturian |
| 2008-09-14 11:35:28 | Welcome Home_(10) | Nicely done... |
| 2008-09-14 11:55:05 | Jane_(0) | Exceptionally well written. Congratulations! I will look for more from you. Sinturian |