| 2015-02-18 08:59:16 |
getting to know Laura
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Thanks I gave the characters a bit more detail in the next chapter |
| 2015-02-28 08:26:54 |
Nate Ch.3_(1)
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Hey you should just make it so people have to be logged on to comment and vote just a thought great job on expressing yourself though. |
| 2015-03-01 09:30:49 |
Rebuilding the Union chapter 2
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So was this too short? Or just right? |
| 2015-03-10 02:15:01 |
Rebuilding the Union Chapter 4
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Any questions? |
| 2015-03-25 14:24:21 |
The forgotten heroes - Chapter One "The adventure begins."
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I proof read it but I uploaded it late so I might have missed a few things like in grammar and such I will do better in the next chapter and might revise the first if the series is any good having all the chapters in one long story |