| 2015-06-07 03:18:40 |
Dilemma
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Anonymous......kisses...muahhhhh |
| 2015-06-07 03:21:15 |
When Secrets Come Out
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more to come ? |
| 2015-06-07 03:27:20 |
My first time with my first love
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A lot of effort, good content,but requires restructuring, particularly spacing...difficult to read.Don't be concerned by the anonymous, they are that for a reason.Keep at it ! |
| 2015-06-08 02:17:30 |
Parent's Pillow Talk Turns Taboo
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Liked the format and content....but not with a 13 yr old......a bit young...16 and up ..cool.... |
| 2015-06-09 07:25:15 |
GOOD LUCK WITH TOMMY
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Good story line Lost Lady, look at the spacing, makes for an easier read, eager to see more of your work..... |