| 2018-01-23 05:38:08 |
Hitching a Ride to Murder
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Nicely done. I loved the final line |
| 2018-01-23 07:06:40 |
Evil Souls Have No Limits
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Excellent story. Sexy. Dangerous and depraved. |
| 2018-01-23 08:24:02 |
It’s Sin to Kill a Tomboy
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Nice to her win.im gonna check to see if you have more, but a teen black widow killer of men would be hot |
| 2018-02-20 02:19:07 |
I Don't Even Know Her Name
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This was extraordinary. Very well written, some of the best quality I’ve seen. Your use of imagery and metaphore is superb. This was, for lack of a better phrase, very authentic feeling. This is a very small niche interest, so I thank you for sharing this tale. |
| 2018-02-20 02:34:20 |
5ft6, 115lbs, 16yearsold, unspoilt... Sold. - Part I
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I very much appriciate good writing and this is excellent. You relate the story with ease, making me feel her submission form the beginning. My taste are a bi more... extreme, but I could see a purpose for keeping a girl like her around for awhile. I’m intrigued as much by your introduction. I’ll be reading more of your work. |