| 2021-01-13 19:23:42 |
Innocent Farm Life 2
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Wonderfully done and I do hope there is more to cum... Thanks for sharing, too. |
| 2021-01-13 19:53:03 |
mind controller chip 2
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Thanks for posting the second chapter, now I can read Chapter 3! Thanks for sharing, too. |
| 2021-02-09 18:18:43 |
Stepmom Godaughter from Portugal Pt 2
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Well, you did break it into more paragraphs, but there's still of lot of work to be done here. Shorter paragraphs are truly needed here to make this easier to read and follow. Once again, I did enjoy it, but it would've been easier to read and follow with much shorter paragraphs. Thanks again for sharing. If you need an editor I'd like to volunteer. |
| 2021-02-09 18:15:16 |
Stepmom Godaughter from Portugal
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The story itself was good but you need to break it down into shorter paragraphs, that makes it easier to read and follow. Otherwise, I did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2021-01-16 01:21:05 |
ABBY & THE CEO 7: MRS. C
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Glad to see you're now posting here but I do miss the pics that went with each chapter! Anywho, thanks for sharing. |