| 2018-06-01 15:13:44 |
The Look_(2)
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What a great story. Any possibilities of a follow-up? |
| 2018-06-28 14:11:57 |
Mom Blackmailed and very happy
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Looking forward to more of this one. |
| 2019-06-26 15:00:32 |
Bigboy 2
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Where's Part 1? Can't really get into a story unless ALL the parts are included! |
| 2019-06-27 14:47:44 |
Big boy 5
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Ok, you've posted Chapter 3 twice, once it was listed as Chapter 4 and then it was on to Chapter 5. My question is this, is there another Chapter 4 or is the Chapter 5 you posted really Chapter 4? Love the story, too. Thanks for sharing. |
| 2019-06-27 15:04:45 |
Big boy 5
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What you really need is a good editor to make your story flow much better. You also need spell check, since so many of your words are use wrong or completely misspelled. I can help, if you're interested. Get with me at Eprise01@aol.com and we'll see what can be worked out. |