| 2015-11-07 07:34:43 |
Cassidy and I_(4)
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I have a little advice. Ignore the rude anonymous posters. They are just trying to get under your skin. On the story, take your time don't rush. That's a good way to ruin an otherwise promising story. Think of it as an actual event if you get stuck. How would you or your character(s) respond in that situation. If you want any help, feel free to PM me. |
| 2015-12-22 17:57:21 |
Light of Hellfire: Chapter 7_(1)
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Another great chapter in a long line of great chapters. Keep it up. |
| 2016-01-22 06:42:43 |
Chosen by the Phoenix_(2)
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I'll say this once. Keep going and you will have loyal readers. Your story is fast paced but flows. You have enough detail to make it interesting and engaging, without bogging the story down with unnecessary info. Clean up the grammar a little (reread the post at a slow pace should help) and you'll be golden. Don't worry about length, write in your own way. And ignore the haters, they are only trying to tear you down because they have nothing better to do. |
| 2016-02-25 09:44:57 |
B.A.Z. prologue
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Not bad for a first story. Clean it up a little and it has a lot of potential. And I have some advice. Write for you. The readers are your audience, if you like the story most will like it as well. There will always be haters who bash your work. Ignore them. If someone offers constructive criticism, whether or not to follow it is up to you. In the end as long as you write a story you'd like to see published you will be well liked on this site |
| 2016-03-05 07:28:22 |
Eternal Darkness: Chapter Five_(0)
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This is one of the greatest stories I have had the pleasure to read. It has all the qualities of a best selling novel. If you were to tell me that this story was a published book I would go buy it. Their are many great authors on this site, and Captius and Mishikal are among them. |