| 2016-03-16 07:03:04 |
Eternal Darkness: Chapter Five_(0)
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Thank you for posting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what the wind and lightning master's connection is to Richard is. |
| 2016-11-15 09:13:24 |
Private Heroes - The Devils Breath Part 7
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A great story. I haven't felt the need to say that in a while. I like the direction this is going in. |
| 2016-06-11 07:17:02 |
Burning Lust_(0)
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Not a bad story. Just a little advice. Ignore the idiots who are to big of cowards to post under a name. Your story has promise, keep writing and do the editing when you can. Something I like to do is write when the ideas hit me then walk away for a bit, get a sandwich or a drink. Then go back and actually read what I've written. Reading aloud helps to. You will find some but not all of the little things. Above all, have fun with it. If you aren't having fun you are not doing it right. |