sexstories.com
Comments from Clover Ernest
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-10-13 05:18:14 | Lost Empire 29 | You never fail to amaze Pars. Looking forward to more. |
| 2016-10-13 06:07:01 | Lost Empire 30 | Continue to create masterpieces, Pars. Your ever loyal fan base is growing continually and awaiting new chapters to all your series |
| 2016-10-14 03:47:27 | GameLive: Chapter One | Hey Ravenguard, this sure is an intriguing storyline withwell incorporated references. At first out reminded me of Tron a bit. Doing great so far, i urge you to continue. There were a few very small typos, but nothing concerning. The one thing that i did take notice off, and wasn't able to ignore, was at various points certain words were in caps lock. Like i said, nothing major I'm my book, but others might blow it out if proportion. |
| 2016-10-14 03:52:18 | GameLive: Chapter One | But if you ever need another author to talk to, go to Pars001. I am always availabls for suggestions, binding ideas off of, revising /editing, etc, its just that I'm not the writer in the family - my older brother is, and over the years we've spent months with of hours together discussing his various stories. Anyway, keep it up man, you got a grand story with a base idea like that! I will look forward to reading the updates. |
| 2016-10-14 04:49:01 | Lost Empire 31 | So they've recreated Shelby, cashed her " your majesty" and almost have Lucy out again. I'm really glad that Shelby is alive, as i was really looking forward to her using the hologram projector thing, then was extremely upset when it was reversed that only Mary would use it. I look forward to more installments, and further progressing of the empire. Btw, i went thru the comments and reported ask the trolls and personal ads. Hour y'all her what's coming to you. |