| 2015-09-14 10:21:59 |
Tagged
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Not bad, more detail could be used, character development, plot, the works. But I'd love to read more. A sequel would be great. Keep up the amazing work. <3 |
| 2015-09-14 11:12:34 |
Mom Needs It
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I. Love. This. |
| 2016-02-15 06:02:49 |
The Night With a Demon
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Supernatural lover? I like. |
| 2016-02-15 06:19:13 |
Dark Queen_(1)
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...it shifted in and out of the first and third person a lot. Although the scene was nice, it was not only confusing but gramatically flawed. It needs eork in that area. Other than that it was okay. |
| 2016-03-04 12:09:39 |
A Close Shave_(0)
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O////O I've shipped this so long and now... Omg... I've gound someone who wrote it. THANK YOU SO MUCH! |