| 2016-09-10 07:15:25 |
Hots for teacher
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I liked the story until you wrote about the hymen. They don't work that way you know. |
| 2016-08-26 08:08:37 |
Chooks Mum
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Needs to be more believable because it looks like this is stereotypical pool guy and lonely wife attitude. You know? Old and unbelievable but somehow you still like it? |
| 2017-03-24 23:42:33 |
"DOUBLE PENETRATIONS"
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These needs a lot more detail and grammatical corrections. Not a bad idea you have started; however you should probably try to add to it or fix it up. |
| 2017-03-24 19:07:33 |
"DOUBLE PENETRATIONS"
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These needs a lot more detail and grammatical corrections. Not a bad idea you have started; however you should probably try to add to it or fix it up. |